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Exam code:8700

On this page we’ve included a fully annotated sample answer to Question 5, Paper 2 of the AQA English Language GCSE. Underneath the example answer, we show you how to structure a full-mark answer and include some expert tips on how to get to that top grade.

The following guide will demonstrate how to answer a Section B task in the format of a review. It includes:

  • Paper 1 Question 5 Grade 9 model answer

  • Question breakdown

  • Planning your response

Paper 2 Question 5 Grade 9 model answer

Worked Example

‘Some people think reading books is outdated and prefer watching videos or listening to podcasts to learn. Others believe books still offer the best way to understand and enjoy information.’

Write a review of a book you’ve recently read for a magazine, giving your opinion on its impact and discussing whether reading is still valuable in today’s digital world.

[24 marks for content and organisation

16 marks for technical accuracy]

[Total: 40 marks]

Answer

Why Great Expectations Still Deserves a Place in Our Lives

In a world where knowledge can be consumed in bite-sized podcasts and through TikTok influencers, the humble book is often cast aside. They’re too long, too slow, too outdated. However, reading Great Expectations by Charles Dickens reminded me why books still matter and that the characters you encounter in those written pages can remain with you long after you’ve turned the final page.

Great Expectations is a coming-of-age story which follows the narrator of the novel, Pip. As an orphan, Pip comes from very modest beginnings, though his life takes a very unexpected turn when he receives news regarding a mysterious benefactor. What follows is a tale of ambition, love, regret and identity, culminating in Pip’s difficult path towards self-awareness.

So what has made Dickens’ storytelling endure over the centuries? It’s so evidently his mastery of language and the memorable characters he has created. Surely, one of his most haunting and iconic characters is Miss Havisham. Shrouded in her wedding dress and frozen in time, she is the embodiment of grief and a symbol of decay. Plus, who could not feel empathy for Magwitch? Initially introduced as a terrifying convict, he becomes the novel’s most poignant example of the power of redemption. Furthermore, through the character of Pip, Dickens forces every reader to reflect not only on Pip’s expectations, but also on our own.

In today’s digital age, some may argue that reading a 500-page Victorian novel is an outdated and pointless task. But that is the beauty of it all. In a world obsessed with instant gratification, curling up with a long novel demands time and patience. It also offers something very rare: the opportunity to be immersed in another character’s world. While videos and podcasts offer instant access to information, books invite us to slow down, experience another place, or consider another perspective.

Reading books like Great Expectations is not just relevant it’s a necessity. Indeed masters like Dickens offer every reader something much more precious and enduring than podcasts or videos ever could. So do yourself a favour… reach for Dicken’s wonderful novel. It perhaps won’t just challenge your expectations, it might end up changing them altogether.

Why would this answer get 40/40 marks? 

  • Communication is convincing and compelling:

    • The review presents a clear and sustained opinion throughout 

  • Tone, style and register are matched to purpose and audience:

    • The personal tone is thoughtful and engaging, creating a strong connection with the reader

  • Ambitious and sophisticated use of vocabulary

  • Sentence demarcation is consistently accurate

  • Fluently linked paragraphs with integrated discourse markers

  • High level of spelling accuracy

Examiner Tips and Tricks

When writing a review, it is essential to keep your audience in mind. 

If the review is for a magazine or general readership, your tone should be engaging and accessible, but not too formal. Use expressive language to communicate your opinion clearly and thoughtfully.

Question breakdown

The first thing you should do is to read the task carefully and identify the format, audience and purpose of the task. This is sometimes referred to as a GAP analysis or the “3 Ws”:

G

A

P

Genre (format)

Audience 

Purpose

What am I writing?

Who am I writing for?

Why am I writing?

For example:

AQA GCSE English Language review writing task
Review writing task

For this task, the focus is on expressing your opinion on a book you’ve recently read, while also exploring the wider debate around the value of reading in today’s digital age. You should consider your audience, readers of a magazine, and adapt your tone and style to suit this audience

Examiner Tips and Tricks

Before you begin writing, be clear about your overall opinion of what you are reviewing. Did it inspire you, challenge you or disappoint you? 

Your viewpoint should be evident from the very start of your review and should remain consistent throughout. Make your judgement clear and support it with references to the text.

Planning your response

You should spend 10 minutes writing a brief plan before you start writing your response. 

For example:

AQA GCSE English Language Review Writing Structure: Is Reading Books Still Relevant?
Writing plan

Learn more and test yourself

For more great tips and tricks, check out our dedicated revision notes on how to answer Paper 2 Question 5 and level up your Question 5 response with our revision note on the Paper 2 Question 5 mark scheme. 

You can also test yourself on Paper 2 Question 5 with expert-created exam questions. Try answering full questions and get them marked by Smart Mark, our AI model created by English Language examiners.

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